12/06/2008
Maybe it did not happen or maybe it did
I found poem in Space #3 by Danielle.
I do not enjoy “Abandoned” because it’s talking about being abandoned and no one loves you.
One of the lines I understand is: “It might hurt to be abandoned, but you have to learn not to show the pain.”
I think this is horrible because they abandoned their child because some of them
do not care about them and some are poor that why they abandoned all of their
children.
Another line that stood out for me is: “The pain to be abandoned hurts” because it seems that their mother and father do not love you.
I look forward to seeing what Danielle makes next because she makes great poems about her life. Maybe it did not happen or maybe it did.
Text posted at 10:08